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#1 kokyo jin

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Posted 17 May 2017 - 08:17 PM

Would appriciate your assistance in translation of this inscribed Kozuka, plus details on maker, style and topic.

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Posted 18 May 2017 - 04:11 AM

A theme of the Kozuka is "Fujimi-Saigyo"(Priest Saigyo seeing Mt. Fuji).

The waka poem is Priest Saigyo's poem.
I can read the Waka poem of the Kozuka,but English translation is difficult to me.


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Posted 18 May 2017 - 07:09 AM

Good morning all.,


If it helps,  I make it out as:


 いつとなき、Itsu to naki, 


思ひは富士の、omohi wa Fuji no,


 烟にて、 kemuri nite,


 おきふす床や、oki fusu yuka ya, 


うき島が原 uki shima ga Hara


Any thoughts Piers or Steve M?

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Posted 18 May 2017 - 07:24 AM

My thoughts? You have done a sterling job, Malcolm!

To translate something like this with no cultural background would be more foolhardy than daring.

On the face of it:

Of a sudden
Thoughts of Fuji (arise)
In the smoke
Awake or asleep,
And Uki-Shima-ga-Hara swamps below

*Nowadays the salty swamps at the foot of Mt Fuji have largely been drained, apparently.

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Posted 18 May 2017 - 01:24 PM

Just a thought, the waka poem is called Fujimi Saigyo.


No 9 of Hokusai's 36 view of mt Fuji is called 尾州不二見原 Bishu Fujimi ga - Hara


Could this be the likely viewing point for Saigyo?


Also, Piers' sterling translation aside, there are two further treatments of Saigyo's works


Saigyô, Poems of a Mountain Home, translated by Burton Watson, Columbia University Press, 1991  


Saigyô, Mirror for the Moon: A Selection of Poems by Saigyô (1118-1190), translated by William R. LaFleur, New Directions 1978.

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#6 kokyo jin

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Posted 18 May 2017 - 01:38 PM

Thank you all for the excellent inputs with extended information !!

Deeply appreciated.



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Posted 19 May 2017 - 02:43 AM

Its a love poem,
My feelings continue, like the never ending smoke from Mt. Fuji
My restless room, like Ukishimagahara
The person is neither asleep nor awake, restless and unsettled. The thoughts of a lost love continue to drift into his mind, like the smoke that continues to rise from Mt. Fuji. And the bedroom is likened to Ukishimagahara, wetlands (marshes, swamps, although I think swamps would not evoke the right image) which stretch out to the foothills of Mt. Fuji. At play here is the word and image of uki-shima (浮き島)or "floating island", a physical location, but also an allusion to the bed floating on tears shed for the lost love, and the tears creating a marshland. And interesting again because we can imagine it was written before Saigyō became a priest, and so there is an added pathos of the priest in the image on the kozuka, looking back on not only Mt. Fuji, but also looking back on his thoughts and emotions as a young man. An interesting theme for a kozuka. 
Standing on the shoulders of a couple of giants here, including the following
No way I would have been able to figure that out on my own. 
(Note this poem is part of the "Poems of a Mountain Home" that Malcom mentions above.)

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